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March 19
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one day,
all the tears that have accidentally fallen over you
will evaporate into the air
and wait patiently in rain-clouds
to fall all over again
but just in a different form

one day,
every poem written about your bright blue eyes
will be about 'no one in particular'
and they will be used for other people i love(d)
they will be nothing but words

and all the stories i forced myself not to write
will be half faded sentences in my head
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i'm not sure if it's obvious, but the idea behind the lack of structure is that as time wears on, i will forget about this person and all the words i wanted to write for them won't be possible to be written.
^ whoa that was really bad english right there. 

also, i hate uploading stuff too often, but this has been sitting in my sta.sh for ages and i thought it was okay to upload.

comments would really be appreciated <3
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Mood: Wow! !NATY-JAMG Mar 19, 2013   Traditional Artist
I wonder if u could pop into my gallery and give me ur comments about my Graphic covers...mmmm....
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Mood: Wow! !NATY-JAMG Mar 19, 2013   Traditional Artist
very nice phrases... flying phrases...mmm...breeze... very beautiful
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~ithaswhatitisnt Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I wish this would happen for me.

I like how the structure generally fades; excellent work!
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~spraining-spirals Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahaa, I wish it would too. I don't know if this will ever happen, but I'm assuming it will

and thank you so much!!
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~ithaswhatitisnt Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I assume it will, too. Time is a great healing tool; slow, but effective. :)

You're welcome! :hug:
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